tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post1226424725964134852..comments2023-06-06T11:41:34.617-05:00Comments on PtL poetry ~ The River Link: one afternoon (Octain)Riverhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09438967617636244335noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-17513506935708941172011-05-17T15:41:08.221-05:002011-05-17T15:41:08.221-05:00Loved one afternoon, such an easy flow to it.
The...Loved one afternoon, such an easy flow to it.<br /><br />The second is over my head, so say no more about that.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-77437318615792362302011-05-17T04:57:53.394-05:002011-05-17T04:57:53.394-05:00Interesting contrasting use of formInteresting contrasting use of formJohn (@bookdreamer)https://www.blogger.com/profile/11576434749272275190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-49462758241510244942011-05-17T01:47:18.132-05:002011-05-17T01:47:18.132-05:00"One afternoon", pretty amusing.
I love..."One afternoon", pretty amusing. <br />I love to muse too. :-)ALIVE aLwaYshttp://alivealways.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-62918998824327759762011-05-16T20:29:45.788-05:002011-05-16T20:29:45.788-05:00One afternoon was great. Thank youOne afternoon was great. Thank youAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-7062881788611034622011-05-16T14:45:03.780-05:002011-05-16T14:45:03.780-05:00Unfair! You did two beautiful poems in this form ...Unfair! You did two beautiful poems in this form and made it look easy!Pennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11084508068938703918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-54557413532084066562011-05-16T14:38:23.051-05:002011-05-16T14:38:23.051-05:00I can't critique these because in my honest op...I can't critique these because in my honest opinion there is nothing to critique. Great form River xAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-53027347428234307922011-05-16T10:48:05.755-05:002011-05-16T10:48:05.755-05:00i like them both a lot river - your use of the for...i like them both a lot river - your use of the form is flawless and you filled them both with great contentClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-14738268983211247212011-05-16T10:26:48.580-05:002011-05-16T10:26:48.580-05:00Two wonderful examples of the form. The first had ...Two wonderful examples of the form. The first had a great impact on me, while the second makes an important statement about the politics of our times.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-77975687653302137122011-05-16T10:23:27.704-05:002011-05-16T10:23:27.704-05:00Not one but two, how clever are you !! Love them b...Not one but two, how clever are you !! Love them both !!<br />JL&BJL Dodgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12713220952100680871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-81583358069482437442011-05-16T10:16:36.114-05:002011-05-16T10:16:36.114-05:00Not one, but two eh? You're spoiling us. I lik...Not one, but two eh? You're spoiling us. I like them both too, but I especially loved the dry political commentary of Union, something I must work to incorporate more into my own poetry.<br /><br />Refreshingly and impressively different demonstrations of the form. Great job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-44382832146975915202011-05-16T09:55:00.921-05:002011-05-16T09:55:00.921-05:00Very good Octaines. I am from Wisconsin, so I REA...Very good Octaines. I am from Wisconsin, so I REALLY relate to the second one! Scary times here.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-13773468521144745432011-05-16T08:04:28.357-05:002011-05-16T08:04:28.357-05:00I like both of them; a little more partial to the ...I like both of them; a little more partial to the first for no particular reason than it's about writing. Well constructed it seems to me and you were able to use the entire first line. Well done! GayBeachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-8944587150303313792011-02-28T10:45:59.613-06:002011-02-28T10:45:59.613-06:00I love One Afternoon.........and admire your skill...I love One Afternoon.........and admire your skill at writing within a form. Forms scare me, and it amazes me how easily other poets manage them:) Well done!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com