tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post7434376807735559349..comments2023-06-06T11:41:34.617-05:00Comments on PtL poetry ~ The River Link: Never had a Chance~prose/poetryRiverhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09438967617636244335noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-2962153941422206572010-12-04T23:36:03.808-06:002010-12-04T23:36:03.808-06:00You've opened several doors this evening with ...You've opened several doors this evening with short power filled stanzas. Thanks for sharing these images.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-32949679458025897462010-12-04T04:37:36.462-06:002010-12-04T04:37:36.462-06:00Thank you for all your comments. :)
Extra thank ...Thank you for all your comments. :)<br /><br />Extra thank you to the ones that understood the pain etc of this piece. An intense reality of life usually kept quiet behind closed doors.Riverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09438967617636244335noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-69727896482045275442010-12-03T23:47:00.538-06:002010-12-03T23:47:00.538-06:00Thanks for sharing this one! I love the phrase &qu...Thanks for sharing this one! I love the phrase "ironed chair"--particularly following the more expected "ironed clothes"--a nice touch.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-90252458728342544072010-12-03T21:15:01.681-06:002010-12-03T21:15:01.681-06:00chilling and succinctchilling and succinctAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-27428871369551699222010-12-03T20:38:45.604-06:002010-12-03T20:38:45.604-06:00Very beautiful imagination..
Take a look on my poe...Very beautiful imagination..<br />Take a look on my poetry..<br />http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2010/11/25/depths-of-my-heartAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-45705050757440560522010-12-03T16:12:00.491-06:002010-12-03T16:12:00.491-06:00River, this is such a compelling read. It reminds ...River, this is such a compelling read. It reminds me of something when I was in High School (eons ago)--an affluent girls high school--and a bunch of us wandered off campus and uncovered a small group of huts, people living in old cars and boxes. The contrast was so stark and changed my-then limited perception of life irrevocably. From the beginning you created a sense of impending doom that Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-55047377816688426222010-12-02T14:53:07.273-06:002010-12-02T14:53:07.273-06:00Lovely little story!Lovely little story!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-43767176316875792792010-12-02T07:20:12.308-06:002010-12-02T07:20:12.308-06:00elegant prose,
well penned...
Thanks for the contr...elegant prose,<br />well penned...<br />Thanks for the contribution to poets rally.<br />have a lovely day.Jinglehttp://www.jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-1352934692547372252010-11-29T10:24:44.633-06:002010-11-29T10:24:44.633-06:00This is intriguing, and I've read it multiple ...This is intriguing, and I've read it multiple times. Still intrigued!Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-24820881317002008222010-11-29T10:20:06.592-06:002010-11-29T10:20:06.592-06:00wow! love the detailed imagery. So sad. I can real...wow! love the detailed imagery. So sad. I can really feel this piece. Wonderful write!<br />I like the form. i've never tried that one.<br /><br />thank youHopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07423174840229628807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-89922082476661148872010-11-28T22:27:08.569-06:002010-11-28T22:27:08.569-06:00Wow, River, these are powerful images, rivetting.E...Wow, River, these are powerful images, rivetting.Especially the "eyes of decaying steel." and the "living room of false order". Hmmm.......I wrote a poem something like this once but I didnt know it was a prose/poetry form. An interesting format. I love the way you try new forms. This was a powerful read. One can picture clearly each person, and feel the underlying emotions. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com