tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post8311401107682109098..comments2023-06-06T11:41:34.617-05:00Comments on PtL poetry ~ The River Link: A Tale of TimeRiverhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09438967617636244335noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-81730686880401377432011-05-08T12:30:28.476-05:002011-05-08T12:30:28.476-05:00Very beautifully written, River. I love it. Wonder...Very beautifully written, River. I love it. Wonderful images, especially the "mountain's tear" being absorbed into the desert sands. Lovely.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-30577499016992660422011-05-06T16:14:40.887-05:002011-05-06T16:14:40.887-05:00Really well planned out shape River, and an extrem...Really well planned out shape River, and an extremely clever choice of words. Loved the thought behind a keeper of time and every drop of water in his well is a part of life.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-34264213836424380292011-05-05T01:59:05.849-05:002011-05-05T01:59:05.849-05:00Thank you everyone. :) I would have loved to put ...Thank you everyone. :) I would have loved to put the picture book on here but..this works.Riverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09438967617636244335noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-57750861492104607412011-05-04T16:41:48.867-05:002011-05-04T16:41:48.867-05:00Wonderful!! Loved the shapes you have given to eac...Wonderful!! Loved the shapes you have given to each stanza.. they lend a doubly richer meaning to the word they hold.. the poem instantly reminded me of the movie "Prince of Persia".. :) <br />Really beautifully narrated, River dear... <br />xoxoKavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-52969682665736616642011-05-04T16:08:25.800-05:002011-05-04T16:08:25.800-05:00Plenty of time for reading that. Enjoyed it.Plenty of time for reading that. Enjoyed it.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-40538110843895611172011-05-04T12:26:10.721-05:002011-05-04T12:26:10.721-05:00Imagining a personified Keeper of Time is lots of ...Imagining a personified Keeper of Time is lots of fun. "Majestic" is the word that comes to mind. Excellent! :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15515148975353849650noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-42318991778740885632011-05-04T06:34:57.935-05:002011-05-04T06:34:57.935-05:00I had one of my favourite singer's voices in m...I had one of my favourite singer's voices in my head - it would make a beautiful haunting melody! Wonderful!nightwishfreakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05107254401588302088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-90012910363824736412011-05-03T22:16:46.329-05:002011-05-03T22:16:46.329-05:00I have spent hours upon hours looking at time ...t...I have spent hours upon hours looking at time ...this is an awesome writing.<br /><br />..really enjoyed itAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-45519318448239846582011-05-03T20:20:24.655-05:002011-05-03T20:20:24.655-05:00Wonderfully expressed with equally interesting ima...Wonderfully expressed with equally interesting imagery. Great entry.<br /><br />(Nice to see you over at my blog. Thanks for commenting)The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-14605099827528316292011-05-03T18:40:52.550-05:002011-05-03T18:40:52.550-05:00...into the future (to finish Brian's thought ......into the future (to finish Brian's thought there). Really like what you did. A very cool way to weave a story together. As for time... an abstract that just is, perhaps? Great work.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-9865953554127317752011-05-03T16:47:43.471-05:002011-05-03T16:47:43.471-05:00epic in scope...love the concrete imagery as it ca...epic in scope...love the concrete imagery as it captures that flow and there are nice rings of truth within...time keeps on slipping slipping slipping...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-61627178361260809302011-05-03T16:45:57.380-05:002011-05-03T16:45:57.380-05:00Lovely ~ it flowed beautifully, and captures the m...Lovely ~ it flowed beautifully, and captures the mystery of time well. :)Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216734722467789412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-11244775432906227392011-05-03T16:33:13.998-05:002011-05-03T16:33:13.998-05:00I like the hourglass thing you did--and I love the...I like the hourglass thing you did--and I love the stanza that begins with: "One drop of Time releases per century..."<br /><br />Would say more, but I've run out of time !Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-56069890193519528372011-05-02T20:00:25.661-05:002011-05-02T20:00:25.661-05:00I wrote this for a local writing contest with a th...I wrote this for a local writing contest with a theme of time. I made it into a picture book. I had a lot of fun doing it. I didn't win. I believe mine was a little too far out there after reading the winner. ;)Riverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09438967617636244335noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-23985137624168243102011-05-02T07:40:24.059-05:002011-05-02T07:40:24.059-05:00Lovely ... Flowing ....time we can't control :...Lovely ... Flowing ....time we can't control :)ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-68265320452460082442011-05-01T19:45:47.167-05:002011-05-01T19:45:47.167-05:00River, we did it! Congratulations! I have an award...River, we did it! Congratulations! I have an <a href="http://elizabethmueller.blogspot.com/2011/04/z-is-for.html" rel="nofollow">award</a> for you!!Elizabeth Muellerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06028099814857743134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2000928375312607149.post-36790062307644806542011-05-01T08:06:04.410-05:002011-05-01T08:06:04.410-05:00this is lovely, River!
flowed so well and captured...this is lovely, River!<br />flowed so well and captured me in it's mystery. sounds like a perfect beginning for haunting tale.<br />time has always fascinated me and you have expressed it so well!<br /><br />images are awesome, especially the second one!Hopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07423174840229628807noreply@blogger.com