Sinking deeper into the center
of a swirling ball of warmth
rising hotter with every word
expanding and growing
burning with long tentacles
spreading through crevices
cracked by past storms
fueling the building energy
striking the point of boiling
the ball explodes at you.
Sinking deeper into the center
of a swirling ball of warmth
rising hotter with every pulse
expanding and growing
burning with long tentacles
spreading through veins
of a swirling ball of warmth
rising hotter with every pulse
expanding and growing
burning with long tentacles
spreading through veins
a warmth of tingles
fueling the building energy
striking the point of love
the ball wraps around you.
fueling the building energy
striking the point of love
the ball wraps around you.
© 5/11
4 comments:
Great use of repetition, nice imagery, great pictures. I feel the warmth just reading it.
hello River, I think this one has urned out very nicely. OI never commented on it on the board but did read it once or twice. I'm particularly liking your approach to structure recently.
Sorry so long getting back to ya
Luke x
i agree with Angela. I too felt the warmth and the intensity. Love the images!
take care!
Cool poem and images:)
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