posted for One Shot Wednesday week 33 at One Stop Poetry
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precursor to suicide…
5 hours ago
About Me
- River
- Minnesota, United States
- As I walk along in life, my muses dance with reflection inspiring me to release the thoughts and emotions of my pondering mind through poetry.
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16 comments:
Sweet and strong ..
Oh this is beautiful, River - and the image is perfect as well. Yes, FLY!!!!!!! Be all you can be. You WOULD NOT BELIEVE how fast life goes, whew, one minute you are in your prime and the next - silver-headed - no wonder the aged are confused, hee hee! Wonderful poem. My favorite kind!
Lovely image. Lovely verse.
The haiku stanza and image work very well to create a great sense of fledgling freedom. Well done, River
So timely now!
ah...i am so ready to fly...soothing...
Short and striking! Sometimes, more than anything, we just need an air of freedom.
powerful.
Lovely and calming...bkm
the wings of freedom...ready to fly as well..
Freedom is a beautiful thing...love this River! :-)
Your words soar to such heights, and so swiftly! Nice piece, River.
Sublime piece.
I really love how the delicate beginning builds to such strength. Very effective haiku River.
Wooowww.... succinct and superbly effective, River...
I hear pleasant tunes when I hear freedom...
Really liked your haiku a lot!
Ahh!! Very good one Haiku. I liked it a lot, River.
Thanks for sharing..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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