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As I walk along in life, my muses dance with reflection inspiring me to release the thoughts and emotions of my pondering mind through poetry.

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Monday, February 14, 2011

Free to Be



posted for One Shot Wednesday week 33 at One Stop Poetry
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16 comments:

Wan Sharif said...

Sweet and strong ..

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Oh this is beautiful, River - and the image is perfect as well. Yes, FLY!!!!!!! Be all you can be. You WOULD NOT BELIEVE how fast life goes, whew, one minute you are in your prime and the next - silver-headed - no wonder the aged are confused, hee hee! Wonderful poem. My favorite kind!

Kim Nelson said...

Lovely image. Lovely verse.

dustus said...

The haiku stanza and image work very well to create a great sense of fledgling freedom. Well done, River

Timoteo said...

So timely now!

Brian Miller said...

ah...i am so ready to fly...soothing...

Nithin R.S. said...

Short and striking! Sometimes, more than anything, we just need an air of freedom.

Promising Poets Parking Lot said...

powerful.

signed...bkm said...

Lovely and calming...bkm

Claudia said...

the wings of freedom...ready to fly as well..

Carrie Burtt said...

Freedom is a beautiful thing...love this River! :-)

Eric 'Bubba' Alder said...

Your words soar to such heights, and so swiftly! Nice piece, River.

Steve Isaak said...

Sublime piece.

Carys said...

I really love how the delicate beginning builds to such strength. Very effective haiku River.

Kavita said...

Wooowww.... succinct and superbly effective, River...
I hear pleasant tunes when I hear freedom...

Really liked your haiku a lot!

Shashi said...

Ahh!! Very good one Haiku. I liked it a lot, River.
Thanks for sharing..

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