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As I walk along in life, my muses dance with reflection inspiring me to release the thoughts and emotions of my pondering mind through poetry.

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Sunday, December 19, 2010

rewrite~ between two realms~ video

This is a rewrite of between two realms presented in video. The original poem is in the archive.

posted for One Shot Wednesday for One Stop Poetry


Eric Alder said...

Nicely done, River! I think the sepia tone lends itself well to the emotional context.

I think it might work better if the camera was zoomed in, just showing your face.

But, of course, you'd have to memorize it, so we wouldn't see you reading the words! ;)

Eric Alder said...

(Also, it would be nice to lose that distracting time counter)

Sherry Blue Sky said...

You read so well, Ms. Poet!!!! Beautifully done.

Anonymous said...

Very nice.

River said...

Noted. :) lol

The next video I will definitely get rid of the timer and try it zoomed in. Did you notice I used try.. :)lol! Those gadgets make me a little uncomfortable but the impersonal world of the computer irk me more.

Sherry :) (a big one from ear to ear) Thank you!

River said...

Thank you Michael. :)

dustus said...

Agree with Sherry. Beautifully done.

River said...

Thank you Dustus.
My confidence is slowly growing with reading my work. If anyone has suggestions feel free to pass them my way. :)

Claudia said...

nice to hear you read your work River

Anonymous said...

I remember this one from the Board - it's really shaped up to be a good piece, especially recited ... and especially recited well, which you do. You read your poetry nicely - your cadence, diction, lilting tone, pause for effect, confidence with and endearing slight shyness of the camera; I think it all equates a fine little video performance, River. Well done, my friend.

Luke @ WordSalad

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