Snow Crystals
tiny cold crystals
mystery of innocence
a fragile dance by thousands
ivory key notes
reveal treasures of beauty
they dance into formations
River 12/10
Sedoka is two katauta poems put together. Each katauta is a 5 7 7 syllable count and can stand on its own. They can be any length and are considered mood poems-for feelings and songs.
5 comments:
This is beautiful. Happy Holidays to you and yours as well.
Very beautiful, River, and complicated to fit your thoughts into such a strict structure - bravo to you for accomplishing it. I see "this many syllables" and my brain glazes over, hee hee.
And interestingly, the snowfall is so rhythmically silent, as if serenity is its music.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
beautiful piece.
I wish I can have this talent.
Thank you for your wonderful comments. :)
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