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As I walk along in life, my muses dance with reflection inspiring me to release the thoughts and emotions of my pondering mind through poetry.

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Tuesday, December 28, 2010

Moments of Sunrise

A vessel of flowing warmth
swirls of vibrant hues
uncovering dark corners
with moments of quivers.
Delicate petals waltz
around the guarded grotto
as solid walls, tighten
breathlessly with every twirl.
The waltz quickens
as waters churn,
the mouth of the cave
wets from within.
                ©River 12/10

 posted for One Shot Wednesday week 26 at One Stop Poetry
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Sherry Blue Sky said...

Beautiful, River. I can see it. Such beautiful landscape.

River said...

I don't know if its good or bad. :) I was trying to describe the sensual feelings of new love with images and the feeling they give you.

Anonymous said...

very vivid description - lovely sensuous writing

LauraX said...

very clear river...and extremely sensual...beautiful!

dustus said...

Your personifications of nature are expressed beautifully.

Brian Miller said...

fanning it hot in here?

Hope said...

very clear on this one
beautifully done!

River said...

LOL! Funny Brian.

Thank you everyone for your comments. :)

Heather said...

Very sensual. I like the way you use nature. Well written. Thank you for sharing.

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Well yepp, I guesed it right, sensual, first love, kiss maybe. When I read the text only version of this, I made this guess, and reading your comment assured me that I was thinking right.

Nice read.

Happy New Year.

Blasphemous Aesthete

Eric Alder said...

I can feel a cool breeze exhaling from the damp cave mouth. Nice One Shot, River.

Carrie Burtt said...

Sunrises are such beautiful moments....a wonderful One Shot River! :-)

Desert Rose said...

Felt deeply River..beautiful!

Aquarius63 said...

Wonderful imagery in your words, beautiful.


Monkey Man said...

I could close my eyes as these words were read and still see the beauty. Excellent.

signed...bkm said...

love the last line....have a warm and blessed New Year...bkm

Steve Isaak said...

Excellent multi-layered work.

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