A vessel of flowing warmth swirls of vibrant hues
uncovering dark corners
with moments of quivers.
Delicate petals waltz
around the guarded grotto
as solid walls, tighten
breathlessly with every twirl.
The waltz quickens
as waters churn,
the mouth of the cave
wets from within.
©River 12/10
posted for One Shot Wednesday week 26 at One Stop Poetry
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picture thanks to Google images
posted for One Shot Wednesday week 26 at One Stop Poetry
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picture thanks to Google images
17 comments:
Beautiful, River. I can see it. Such beautiful landscape.
I don't know if its good or bad. :) I was trying to describe the sensual feelings of new love with images and the feeling they give you.
very vivid description - lovely sensuous writing
very clear river...and extremely sensual...beautiful!
Your personifications of nature are expressed beautifully.
fanning myself...is it hot in here?
very clear on this one
beautifully done!
LOL! Funny Brian.
Thank you everyone for your comments. :)
Very sensual. I like the way you use nature. Well written. Thank you for sharing.
Well yepp, I guesed it right, sensual, first love, kiss maybe. When I read the text only version of this, I made this guess, and reading your comment assured me that I was thinking right.
Nice read.
Happy New Year.
Blasphemous Aesthete
I can feel a cool breeze exhaling from the damp cave mouth. Nice One Shot, River.
Sunrises are such beautiful moments....a wonderful One Shot River! :-)
Felt deeply River..beautiful!
Wonderful imagery in your words, beautiful.
Anita.
http://anitaspoetry.blogspot.com/2010/12/cinnamon-and-sandalwood.html
I could close my eyes as these words were read and still see the beauty. Excellent.
love the last line....have a warm and blessed New Year...bkm
Excellent multi-layered work.
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