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As I walk along in life, my muses dance with reflection inspiring me to release the thoughts and emotions of my pondering mind through poetry.

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Friday, April 8, 2011

G- Gritty Moments of Truth


well, here I am traveling life’s path
among the foothills of Mt Ziibi
carrying way too many belongings
teetering with upward steps

around midday, it's time to break
near a pool of a mountain stream
splashing my flushed cheeks, I sit
contemplating all I am carrying.

It’s hard not to laugh at myself
clinging to material as if its flesh
so many memories intertwined
with the weights that hold me back.

                                        © River 4/11

5 comments:

Claudia said...

hm - think i know this feeling..well expressed

Angela Felsted said...

What a fabulous poem. I'm so glad to discover another poet. And your sentences are so smooth. I love it.

River said...

the feeling where you know you've taken on too much. :)

Thank You :)

Monica said...

Brilliant!! Found you from the A-Z Challenge, I’m now following you on GFC and I hope you have a chance to check out my blog!
Monica
http://oldermommystillyummy.blogspot.com/

Hope said...

oh, yes! a feeling well expressed in your beautiful style, River. I do understand this all too well.

lovely write!

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