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As I walk along in life, my muses dance with reflection inspiring me to release the thoughts and emotions of my pondering mind through poetry.

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Thursday, April 7, 2011

F- Finding his Freak


I bet few of you know
what I mean by freak.
A term a girlfriend passed
my way with a tweak

a distasteful behavior
unacceptable by most
endured by some
every man has a ghost.

some are minor and cute
others are majorly lifelong
some totally match yours
others are completely wrong.

Its your job to find his freak
then ask if you think you can
live with his critique
and make him your man.

7 comments:

Hope said...

freaks are everywhere!
expressed very well in your poem

take care!

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

love your view on freaks..

many are, smiles.
keep it up.

Anonymous said...

Freaks make life more interesting.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Love this. A very wise realization in the final stanza.

Shelli said...

Everyone is a freak, it's just that some hide it, and others don't need to. Good post.

Anonymous said...

Hahaa! I'm a unique freak, but I guess everyone feels that way! Loved the rhymes, not seen you use many before. Awesome River

baygirl32 said...

everybody need a freak!

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